Feb 17, 2012

Zepplin Dreams/With Laurie's word: ethereal

Planted to grow,
seeds of imagination extend beyond earth,
riding their zepplin of dreams
into the far reaching desire of the dreamer,
until the dreamer becomes the dream.
and the ethereal becomes earth.
©J.V/2012
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10 comments:

  1. Maude LynnFebruary 17, 2012

    That's really lovely!

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  2. Kerry O'ConnorFebruary 17, 2012

    I like the outward movement of this poem, and then the return of the last 3 lines. Very cool.

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  3. Laurie KolpFebruary 17, 2012

    I like the title... this is dreamy... perfectly ethereal.

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  4. AnnFebruary 17, 2012

    Hi Winter just wanted to tell you I love your poetry
    I read it and think sometimes you are talking about me lol
    I have read all your poems and love them and after reading your profile you and I have a lot of the same likes.
    I'm so glad you visited my blog and I found your site!:)
    After my Mom passed away I sit up some nights when I can't sleep and write little poems on how I feel but never showed anyone except my hubby which he just laughs, just things that are swirling in my head lol Helps to write it down
    ty for writing your poetry and sharing it with everyone
    hugs,Laurie

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  5. EllaFebruary 17, 2012

    I love the magic quality in your words, so beautiful

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  6. Mary Ann PotterFebruary 17, 2012

    Imaginations becoming reality --- a very lovely write!!!

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  7. Kay L. DaviesFebruary 17, 2012

    This is great. I especially love the last two lines.
    K

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  8. MaryFebruary 17, 2012

    Impressive response to Laurie's prompt!

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  9. UnknownFebruary 17, 2012

    Thanks to everyone for the amazing comments!! I'm so glad that someone is reading and enjoying :-)and Laurie Scrapes, maybe you should add another page to your blog. Poetry is an amazing mind soother, and I would love to read you!

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  10. GraceFebruary 18, 2012

    I like the reaching to the sky, then back to the earth like a cycle.

    Nice to meet you at RT ~

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